Hopelessness

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Hopelessness

Hopelessness, oh what a feeling

To have hopelessness is not so appealing

For days on end I wondered if this feeling would ever go away

So I fell to my knees and began to pray

I am so sad, I am so blue---

I just don't know what to do

Then I prayed another prayer that the Lord will get me through

I prayed that I wouldn't pull the trigger

But my thought of ending it all kept getting bigger

Lord forgive me if I follow through

I ran out of patient, instead of running to you

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jesusfreake commented on Hopelessness

12-22-2009

wow...the ending is so deep...there is so much faith in u that I'm so glad to have noticed...u get the whole idea of trusting God and I love how u always express that trust in ur poems...especially in this one...this is so beautiful and powerful as well...

Rygar commented on Hopelessness

11-23-2009

i think the title is very appropriate for the feelings here, well written and a sorrowful joy to read.

1990lh commented on Hopelessness

10-02-2009

wow butthead i really relate to this sometimes things r just to much and u just want it all to go away u dont wanna think about the consequences of ur actions u just want the pain to go away, cuz every day seem never ending and full of so much hurt, and your just feel lost. although its hard to do, and, i need to do this myself, u have to try to let go of all that go and put it in God hands, excellent write butthead

1990lh

10/02/2009

how da hell u have an 8.6 u sould have an 10, haters always hating.:0)

NoLeafOfClover commented on Hopelessness

07-07-2009

You I read this and I also read your other work, to be honest I felt and liked the oppeness if there is a such a word. Very open and honest, and maybe overwhelming, and thats in a good way. Thank you man keep writing.

kmeadows commented on Hopelessness

06-22-2009

Very good Seven, very honest. I can feel the hopelessness in the aura, I hope that if this is a real feeling for you, that you are able to turn towards God instead of giving up. Great job on the poem, and good for you for staying so strong!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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FIRST FLIGHT 9
Almost Jailbait 14
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America’s Fabrication 2
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Strada sola della stella 1
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KEN 1
Short, Simple and Sweet 1
Pray and Pray Again 1
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Look What America Has Done For Me 2
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So We Can Meet A'gin 2
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THE DAWN IS CALLIN' 7
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I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO 9
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Let Me Not Forget To Pray 26