HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

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HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

IN THE HOSPITAL, I'M DRAWING A BLANK.
IN THE HOSPITAL, I HAVE A LOW RANK.
NO INSURANCE DO I HAVE.
TRYING TO BE BRAVE, I HOPE MY BODY WILL BEHAVE AND NOT BETRAY ME AS COUNTLESS OTHERS.
NOT ACT LIKE A CARELESS LOVER.
SITTING IN THIS ROOM, FIGHTING OFF THOUGHTS OF DOOM AND GLOOM.
MY CHEST IS HURTING.
IT'S HARD TO BREATHE.
WILL I EVER GET RELIEF?
THIS PACKED WAITING ROOM IS BEYOND BELIEF.
WHO DO I SEE?
WHO ELSE, BUT MY LOVE.
SENT TO ME LIKE AN ANGEL FROM ABOVE.
TO STAY WITH ME.
TO BRING ME PEACE.
TO GIVE ME A SENSE OF EMOTIONAL RELIEF.
EVEN THOUGH, MY PHYSICAL PAIN IS GREAT, TO MY BODY I AM IN TUNE AND CAN RELATE.
I AM SICK AND TIRED OF THIS WAIT!!!
TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 10/10

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Tyme commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

02-23-2011

8-12 hours...that's the expected wait time in an average EMERGENCY ROOM!!! Hello, did I miss something??? I like.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

04/28/2011

lol!! exactly my point. thank you for reading and commenting..........E

FranzJ commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

being a retired Firefighter and EMT, I know what hospotal ERs can be light - if it was a weekend it was crowded (the gun and knife club) if during ythe week its a roll of the dice - good luck in the future

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for reading and responding as well as your well wishes.........E

cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diction is 10+ Reply to Comment

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting.........E

cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diciton is 10+

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for your feedback. It is very much appreciated........E

smoothdame commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-01-2010

good job I like this poem because hospitals can make you crazy it is always good to have company.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
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DO YOU KNOW 13
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DEEP 2
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YOU 1