How I found you


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    20 words or less challenge

    How I found you

    I wanted you so bad that I searched for me, and while searching for me I found you.

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    EbonyQueen48 commented on How I found you


    wow thi is short and beautiful, it gets right to the point of true love because we do sometimes lose ourselves in searching for our true mates but when we find them we definitely find ourselves, excellent write here, my friend

    DainHere commented on How I found you


    This poem is just right to the point, also painfully honest. :)

    ChrisP commented on How I found you


    The challenges are the hardest to complete in. Not sure about this one? The challenges are the hardest to me, to complete in I understand what you are going for, but would like To see more of your words to round out the poem aesthetic



    This I found met the challenge best, I took my eyes off of her and made myself better for her more appealing and it attracted her, it made her appreciate my efforts, SEE?

    LadyEniAnah commented on How I found you


    wow short and sweet and very well put...awesomely done



    thank you for the support I will read some of yours soon

    am2anangel commented on How I found you


    Very well done in much less then 20 words. lol! Sometimes the best ones are so few words. Sometimes things just get all muddled up with too many words. Like this comment. lol! Well done.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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