i am so mad off!!

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    i am so mad off!!

    taking this heart break
    i know i've made mistake
    but damn for gods sake
    dont leave me in the cold
    im dying every i hear you say
     that you dont love me
    but cant you see
    i have so much to please
    my hands are growing tired of this
    and all of this shit
    i wish i could end it
    but i'd rather transend it to something new
    something you cant ever use
    your worlds are lies
    you are what i despise
    my grudge will live on
    but your hate will wither
    but remember when you grow old
    i'll leave to to grow mold!
    and on your death bed
    tears of blood will shed
     you've stepped in hell
    and now on the spot where the heavens have fell
    i burn you to ashes more to the eye than just one stabb of your hating knife!

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    purplevampgod commented on i am so mad off!!

    06-01-2009

    good poem. well at least i think it is. i want to cry but cant. cuz tears are for the weak. and i dont like showing weaknesses

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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