I am the wind vane (Tuanortsa)

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    kept it simple. :) A Tuanortsa is a free verse form that reads forward and backwards— line by line. The form starts and ends with the title of the poem. So the opening line and the closing line are the same line. It can have different meanings depending on the direction that the poem is read (mine doesn't really - hehe).I am the wind vane

    I am the wind vane (Tuanortsa)

     I am the wind vane
    I wait upon you wind
    To turn-
    You are my energy.
    I need what you give
    To be me -
    I am the wind vane.

    I am the wind vane
    To be me
    I need what you give:
    You are my energy.
    To turn
    I wait upon you wind.
    I am the wind vane.

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    Springsize commented on I am the wind vane (Tuanortsa)

    07-05-2010

    . Poem 18 Tuanortsa is a free verse form that reads forward and backwards— I am the wind vane (Tuanortsa) I am the wind vane I wait upon you wind To turn- You are my energy. I need what you give To be me - I am the wind vane. I am the wind vane To be me I need what you give: You are my energy. To turn I wait upon you wind. I am the wind vane. _________________________________________ I see that you have mastered this poetic form, of simple in a complicated form... to read a poem in both directions is fun... and you easily found the key to do this... and your poem message is a bit unique... I like that...
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    dahlusion commented on I am the wind vane (Tuanortsa)

    07-02-2010

    this is unique in its almost avant-garde style. bravo!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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