I ASPIRE

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A salute to all of  those  who  are  aspiring  to  be  all they can possibly be in True Light!

I ASPIRE

I Aspire to Control My Desires
For it is Required to Lead By Example
I Aspire to Separate Want from Need
Because All My Wants Are From What I See
I Aspire To Climb Real High
Attaining Such Heights Comes With Risk to Fall
I Aspire to Hold onto Love
Even with the greatest Love You Sometimes Must Let Go
I Aspire to be Slow to Criticize
All the time what I most hate, I probably hold inside
I Aspire to Attain All the Goals I Set
Hoping Not To Gain Goals by Losing My Soul
I Aspire to Speak Properly
Standing Up For My Personal Rights is Never a Luxury
I Aspire to Experience Prosperity
A man’s treasures cannot be measured monetarily
I Aspire to Hear and Uphold God’s Word
Whose to Say God Isn’t Speaking to Me?
I Aspire 2B
Who I Am
Now I See
What I Aspire is Determined by ME!

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Paradice21 commented on I ASPIRE

07-22-2009

Very visual And very enjoyable poem....And oh so very true! I really loved those last 2 lines ‎ Now I See ‎ What I Aspire is Determined by ME! So Reach out and go for everything your heart desires as long as ‎it is true and heartfelt You can have all the desires of your heart...Right?!! Much success ....Paradice!‎ Nicely Wrote!

SILKYTWEED

07/22/2009

This is Real Talk as you seem to agree, GOD is always the final word but the choice lies with me...Thanks, All the Best!

FlowerGirl commented on I ASPIRE

07-20-2009

Wow! SilkyTweed, I Really Love This Write....It's Real, It's Honest. The Courage That Is Expressed, Throughout This Reading. Is Of High Magnitude!! ...I Especially Enjoyed The Last Six Lines, Beginning With..."I Aspire To Hear And Uphold God's Word...Etc... Thank You For Sharing. As Always..I Look Forward To Many More Of Your Master Piece's....Smile!!..So Be Inspired!...Be Encouraged!...And Respectfully...Let God Lead The Way.... FlowerGirl,

SILKYTWEED

07/20/2009

Masterpieces...wow, more of a sharing of what lies in side, but your view and comments I humbly respect and say thank you for your encouragement....Thanks...SilkyTweed

poetress77 commented on I ASPIRE

07-19-2009

That was a GREAT write, I favorited it, yes I did, props

SILKYTWEED

07/20/2009

Thank you so much poetress77...I'm glad you favorited this piece! Blessing....ONE

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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