I Believe

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    I Believe
    Savior, Savior 
    You openly bleed 
    You bring your presence 
    and I'm down on my knees 
    There's no other 
    No other for me 
    Such a beautiful mercy 
    Sacrificed on a tree 

    Come down 
    Come down 
    Like a waterfall, please 
    Take me home 
    This is my plea 
    Bring your fire 
    Free all my needs 
    I bow down at the altar 
     Now you belong to me 

    Father, Father 
    How can it be? 
    What have I done? 
    That you would help me see? 
    Take me, use me 
    In all that I am 
    I'll sing out your name 
    For you are the Lamb! 

    Reign all 
    Rule all 
    Like the King you are 
    Jesus, Yahweh 
    The day isn't far 
     I can't escape you 
    You're more than I need 
    Beautiful one... 
    I believe

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    LarryB commented on I Believe

    10-09-2010

    An Awesome write Hanna....With Great rhyme.....Larry
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    FreeBird02 commented on I Believe

    05-13-2010

    HannahLynn this is a very insightful and well structured poem. Each stanza enlightens the one before. This style has brought an enhancement to search for the full and true meaning you have to offer. Great Job.
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    Qualin commented on I Believe

    05-13-2010

    IT IS SO AWSOME TO KNOW SOMEONE YOR AGE IS WRITING POEMS NOT ONLY VERY GOOD BUT THE SUBJECT IS SO NECESSARY FOR THIS TIME...FROM ALL SIGNS IS COMING TO AN END VERY SOON !! fOR i AM THE LAST GENERATIONi SEE MY FRIENDS DIEING CONSTANTLY,i TRY ANY WAY I CAN TO LEAD THEM TO THE lORD,FOR IF YO SAY I AM YOR FRIEND THE GREATEST THING YOU CAN GIVE ANYONE ABOVE ALL RICHES IS THE DIRECTION TO EVER LASTING LIFE !! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS GREAT POEM IT IS A 10X10 FOR ME...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN
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    HannahLynn commented on I Believe

    04-08-2010

    Thank you!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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