I Can't Believe

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i wrote this when i met a guy i became friends with....we went to jod corps together and i did have a dream about him.....but i was already with my bf so i hurt myself and them tring to figure out who i was better off with....

I Can't Believe

I can hear the heartbeat
of my own soul
yet i do not know
where my soul
has hidden the slow
beat and the dieing
heart is not
what is killling me
it is this wicked
game I'm playing
with my feelings
and my emotinons
still how could i
have dreamed you
before i met you
how could i play
with these emotions
like i do
and why did i fall
in love with you
why do i hurt myself
like this while
i sit and watch
the water i can't
believe i met you
and i can't believe
god plucked you
from my dreams
i still can't see
how your every look
your every move
came from my dreams
still i can't believe
you are real
how did you come to be
and why did
i let you do
i can't believe
god sent me my angel
and i ripped apart
his beautiful heart
i can't believe
i hurt my angel
and worse yet
i can't believe
your soul reads off
words of love
when i look in your eyes
i can't believe
i let my heart fall
and i let my love
hurt so bad
i can't believe
you are the one god
wants me to be with....

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Pat007 commented on I Can't Believe

08-23-2009

Very good DC. That's the way say to someone that you love, I love you. Don't ever forget to love is the most important function we have. I felt the emotion and passion in your poem. Thanks for sharing

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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