I CARE ABOUT YOU

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    I CARE ABOUT YOU

     I CARE ABOUT YOU.

         I HOPE YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY TOO.

    I CARE ABOUT EVERYTHING YOU DO.

        I HOPE YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY TOO.

    MY BLINDERS ARE ON AND, YET, STILL I CAN SEE.

        YOUR EVERYTHING I NEED YOU TO BE.

    YOUR THE PERSON I WANT TO KISS FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE.

         ONLY YOU, AS YOUR LOYAL WIFE.

    TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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    shakeme4life commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

    10-17-2010

    great poem , this is what people who have been married for a long time need to read every so often to remind them of why they love each other ..
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/18/2010

    Remembering why you fell in love with that person will help you treasure the relationship. Thanks for reading and commenting........E

    Jammin commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

    10-13-2010

    I am struck by your poetry. How simply you put the most complex of emotions down. You shine a light on a well worn path and illuminate something deeper, older, wiser. I am astounded by your gift.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    Wow. Thank you. Your words really mean a lot to me. I have read some of the most amazing work on this site and to have someone think the way I feel about the works of others is humbling. I really appreciate your thoughts.........E

    smoothdame commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

    10-13-2010

    It can be amazing whey you find the perfect person for you. It makes all the hard times and sacrifices seem worth it. great job
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/19/2010

    So true. Love is hard work to keep and maintain, but the rewards are limitless. Thanks for reading and commenting.......E

    Tyme commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

    10-12-2010

    Love cover a whole slew of sins! This is what gets us through when we feel alone. This poem is what should be, always.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    True indeed! Thanks for your comment.....E

    Chaos128 commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

    10-12-2010

    "MY BLINDERS ARE ON AND, YET, STILL I CAN SEE." is the key line that says everything. Being blind to a loved one's faults is... well... that's what love means... isn't it?
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    10/13/2010

    Just like "Perfectly Imperfect", my love is strong so I can work with his imperfections just as he does for me. Yes love can be blind, deaf, dumb, but I refuse to lose those other senses. Thanks for reading and commenting......E

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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