MootPoint commented on I died today

04-26-2013

Very somber write. I like the flow of this one. It seems you could expand more on this though.

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MrGee commented on I died today

11-20-2011

EXcellent! you say so much using few words which is what I believe is the mark of a great poem. an obvious 10

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cheronld commented on I died today

07-03-2011

Your grasp for the everyday questions and issues is quite remarkable....another outstanding piece....Cher

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MommyOf2Girls6 commented on I died today

04-25-2011

I love it. So very true. What happens to others happen to us as well. As Euripides wrote, "When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him." I feel this poem is an extension on those words. Very nice.

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ShadowEyes commented on I died today

04-01-2011

This is a very nicely written poem. :) I'm not really too good at doing critiques on poems, but I do say this is very good. :)

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