I Don't Know...

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i just wrote this. its just something i thought of

I Don't Know...

 

Feelings start to come but I don't know where I felt them before

Time starts to slow but I don't know how to start it up again

People start to come but I don't know who they are

Light starts to come but I don't know how to face it

Darkness starts to envelop me but I don't know how to free myself

Peace starts to come but I don't know how to deal with it

Love starts to come my way but I don't know how to feel it

Death starts to darken my days but I don't know how to brighten them

Stars start to fall but I don't know how to wish on one

GOD starts to call but I don't know how to answer Him

Memories start to show themselves but I don't know where they came from

        There will be things you don't know

        Times that you don't remember

        Feelings you have never felt

        This I know...

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brokenhearted11 commented on I Don't Know...

03-09-2011

Very emotional, and phenomenal at that. I can relate to the topic, and I like the repetitiveness. I particularly love the first four lines(: Great job here, really. Keep writing!

blue92 commented on I Don't Know...

03-09-2011

You have a lot of passion in your writting :) keep it up

angelchaser commented on I Don't Know...

03-08-2011

I really enjoyed this peice honey. Very nice job, I must say.

Ninjaboy commented on I Don't Know...

03-08-2011

yes there are many things in this world we'll never know, nor understand, but we will always be learning more every day =)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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