I have you

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    • Wow it's been a long time since I've visited my account they've changed everything! I need to get back into my groove of writing just been so busy being a new Mommy!!!

    I have you


    He loves me, he loves me not. That was never the thought.
    When he says those words I know they are true.
    If they weren't my heart would stop and turn blue.
    That is how much love I have for you. Before I found you I didn't have a clue.
    A clue about what it meant to truely love another. Everything else was just a cover.
    I look at you and I can see forever. Your sweet voice singing me to sleep.
    So thankful we are together. Your heart is mine to keep.
    I feel your tender touch. Kissing your soft lips I love so much.
    When I'm with you time doesn't exsist. Your smile brightens my world.
    Seeing you everyday when I wake, I pinch myself to make sure it isn't fake.
    I'm not dreaming you are my prince charming. Your the answer to my prayers.
    All my wishes have come true. I have you now and forever!

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    wildpendigus commented on I have you

    06-22-2009

    Very good has good title, shows how much talent that you have and I'm sure if you keep writing you will get better and better each, not saying that you're not good noe with a little polish you'll be perfect! good luck! grecowong@yahoo.com

    Weatherstone commented on I have you

    04-08-2009

    I felt like some of the rhyming was a little forced and too predictable. Try mixing it up a little bit, especially when expressing sentiment otherwise it sounds too much like a "Hallmark Card". Pay attention to form and flow to help and guide the reader. I think this is good but could be reworked a little.

    frgy25 commented on I have you

    02-04-2009

    once again, i have enjoyed the read!!! thank you!

    syed commented on I have you

    02-04-2009

    sucha a lovely piece of work ..... make ur boy read dis!!!!! KEEEP WRITIN

    poohbear commented on I have you

    02-02-2009

    its so deep i like it

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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