I know this phenom

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    I know this phenom

    Who’s from Death Valley
    His name is undertaker
    He's from down under
    Mind games he's good at
    And coffins are his thing
    He'll tombstone you, her
    Any which way till sunday
    & fold your arms
    Letting you RIP
    As the ref counts 1,2,3


    His entrance alone
    Will send chills down
    One's very spine

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    dahlusion commented on I know this phenom

    04-28-2009

    Very sexy in a dark way.

    NevillePark commented on I know this phenom

    03-20-2009

    I would say you have a good sense of timing and content punctuation. You should try your hand at writing a play. ['not downplaying the value of a poem mind you.]

    Nicko7 commented on I know this phenom

    02-23-2009

    tis a nice enough verse very pleasant to read

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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