I remember when you used to be my everything

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    Ladies do you remember when you used to call your man pet names like poppy, cannon and big daddy? But lately he's been taking you for granted and caring less and less about your feelings.  Do you rememeber when he used to be your everything?.........................

    I remember when you used to be my everything

    I remember when you used to be my everything
    when your very presence used to make my heart sing
    but lately you been letting the sun beat you home
    starting arguments and talking to me in unnatural tones
    be easy poppy
    pump your breaks
    and act like this relationship is something that you want
    or more importantly that you know whats at stake
    if out of this relationship is what you want,
    I can arrange for you to get your walking papers boo
    just tellme whatsup so we both can rock out and do what we do

    always talking bout you tried, tried, tried
    when all you really did was lied, lied, lied
    yeah i saw the ruby red lipstick all over your shirt
    and i smelled the unfamiliar scent of another women on your skin
    damn that hurt

    i have been consistently putting up with your mess
    i know i make it look easy but i must confess
    sometimes i just want to bust you in the head with a pan
    cause when i ask you why, your only excuse is baby i'm a man
    and you should just understand

    well a real man doesnt make his women hurt
    and a real man doesnt chase behind every skirt
    and a real man takes care of his home
    and a real man realizes that if doesnt change
    hes going to be all alone

    I know what your saying, you said it a thousand times
    there's 7 women to every man
    their a shortage of men baby girl

    but all seven of those other women can't make up one of me
    cause im a thouroughbread and a pearl
    the only thing those other women can offer you is a real, real good time,
    but Big Daddy, I was offereing you the world.

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    BoSweets commented on I remember when you used to be my everything

    11-28-2009

    You go girl.. This is a very nice one. I love it!! Peace BoSweets

    LBoogie

    12/01/2009

    Thanks Bo I sent you my correct phone number too

    AR commented on I remember when you used to be my everything

    11-16-2009

    Boy some of us don't when the relationship is over do we, we just ride it out until the wheels fall off. Just let it go

    crazzyy4u commented on I remember when you used to be my everything

    11-12-2009

    wow i love this poem i like the energy it gives off good job

    BigDaddyCash commented on I remember when you used to be my everything

    11-08-2009

    Well since my name is Big Daddy Cash Neve I guess I better watch my P's and Q's. You see little Miss Boogie I am a man and I proud of who I am. My women have all been treated like Queens, I've had three but only one at a time. I lost the first one to another man, the second to cancer and the third to her career. All three were the best of things that could happen to me, They gave me the best son and daughters imaginable. I proud to say that I was the best part of their life and they were the best part of mine. The only pet names I can remember them calling me was Honey or Sweetheart. I hope your endeavor to help women is successful but remember dear lady all men are not like your man. Some of us are knights in shining armor. LOL, BDC

    LBoogie

    11/10/2009

    I know your not like that Big Daddy but i have to put that out their for the women who are being swindled by these men who have nothing but time to sit and manipulate a good women.

    BigDaddyCash

    11/08/2009

    I just read your reply to Cherry. I loved it! If a women treated me the way your man treated you it would surely be Big Daddy's way or the highway. Ha Ha

    cherrymccloud commented on I remember when you used to be my everything

    11-08-2009

    Amen to that. Just keep being real. One day you will get tired of not being number one. Then he will see by your actions that it is time to move on. He will be the first to know. Your actions speak louder than words alot. He will know you are done because you will be so nonchalant.

    LBoogie

    11/08/2009

    true that mommy but some women cant take a hint, they stay in it too long my tolerance is short its boog's way or the highway you feel me

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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