I Tried To See You There
I tried to see you there
But all I could see
Were the clouds in the air
Passing by
In the sky
And I didn’t see you
When love passed me by
And I didn’t see you
Even when I tried.
I Tried To See You There
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- reyjamiei
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BabyGurl91 commented on I Tried To See You There
11-15-2009
- Short & Sweet. I like it. Keep up the good work.
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jademelissa74 commented on I Tried To See You There
11-14-2009
- A very touching piece. Short, yet powerful in content. Each word represent reflection. Good job!
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