I Wish

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    I Wish

    Wish I could see the sunrise,
    in your bright green eyes.
    Wish I could be the first to hear,
    your sleepy morning sighs.
    Wish it were my arms,
    to rouse you with a hug.
    Wish my feet could brush against your's,
    before they touched the rug.
    Wish my lips could warm your smile,
     before your coffee cup.
    Wish my name was on your mind,
    the moment you woke up.

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    Jerrysgirl commented on I Wish

    07-28-2017

    Beautifully written with passion, i love it. Short but so full of meaning.

    cherrymccloud commented on I Wish

    12-17-2012

    some times all we are every gonna have or get from someone is in our wishful thinking!

    train64 commented on I Wish

    02-02-2011

    What a nice write. Excellently worded. Very touching. Train 64

    erroneousflint commented on I Wish

    01-26-2011

    You have the gift of embellishing with austerity...

    brokenwings69 commented on I Wish

    01-20-2011

    Very nice! I love this poem simple but it tells it all...do we all wish...thank u for sharing

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