IF A WOMAN WANTS YOU

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    IF A WOMAN WANTS YOU

    If a woman wants you, she should say

    If a woman doesn't want you and you ain't got no money, she will definately toss you away. Stop throwin' money at these woman to make them stay, cuz if that woman got her own money, she has already been about findin' her own way!

    Stop trying to buy a gold-digger's affection when all you got is what you gave her.....now you up there screamin'............
    .......its Mine, its Mine, its Mine! Psych, you thought you had a goldmine.....

    Why be in a relationship with that woman if you don't really relate? I tell you why cause alimony and child support takes all your cake......

    If you break up with a woman its always cuz of that man's fault..... Real grown-ups whether Man or Woman take
    responsibility for their own shorts!

    You can do a whole lot of things for a man, but what have you done that he has asked?

    So you want a man to respect your honor, a roughneck to protect your back whether home or in the street, but you steadily berate him because of the felony assault rap he can't seem to beat.....

    All men are most certainly not dogs, but the one with the loudest bark seems to always be the one that starts out fine but ends up real weak.....same as a woman who looks really fine, but really ain't that sweet!!!

    So the next time you put down the thing called man, take a second to re-evaluate because the problem might be you, CUZ WE ARE WHAT WE EAT!

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    Charmin commented on IF A WOMAN WANTS YOU

    07-22-2009

    Hi SILKYTWEED, Hands down, I absolutely LOVED the poem. Mad LUV to my mom for teaching me to see people for who they are and NOT for what they are or for what they have. I'm not a gold digger nor a materialistic person, but I do know a few who are like that. I, on the other hand love "the thing called man" and have no problem keeping him motivated, opposed to putting him down. Letting a man be a man definitely has its benefits, as well as, letting a woman be a woman ... while keeping in mind that no one is perfect. No need to hate because your poem has a lot of truth to it. It's a shame that we live in a world where there are people like this. However, if it were drama-free, wouldn't we all be bored? I didn't read the poem IF A MAN WANTS YOU, but I will definitely look for it. AWESOME!

    SILKYTWEED

    07/22/2009

    Hey Charmin many thanks for your comments, I agree that all types of people make up this world and this poem is not an indictment of one group, it applies to who it applies to....thank you!

    FlowerGirl commented on IF A WOMAN WANTS YOU

    06-18-2009

    Hi, SILKYTWEED, Although, I am a Woman, I am commenting on this Poem, without feeling upset or any expression of Negativity. because, I Know myself. And, I have never been with a man for what he has or doesn't have. Many women may be that way. However; many woman are not. There are alot of good women in this world. And good men. I believe, it just really hard sometimes for them to connect! And, even if they ever do connect. Sometimes, for men, Or woman, because Wealthy women also have experienced a Man wanting them for their Money as well! They been through so many false People, that, it makes it hard for them to see that person for the good Person, they may be. I believe, No matter what we been through with a past lover or friend. It's fair to give someone the benefit of the doubt, WITH Lil CAUTION, IF YOU FEEL NECESSARY,until they show otherwise. It.s about Love, and Falling In Love, Friendship and Getting to know one another. rather, one or the other is Rich or Poor. Or two people in love have nothing, I would say, When we realize We've been taken for a ride It's Best to, Dust our Feet, Take the Good from it and Keep Moving. There is So Little time In Life for us to Stay In Anger, and Bitterness. All the Things that can Poison our Minds, Our Hearts, Our Bodies, Our Relationship with God, And Definitely Our Lives! You are Very Talented, As, I have read other Poems that you have written. I will continue to read more in the future. I like the poems I've read thus far, because, your words Express True Feelings and Honesty. That Deserves Respect, Even where, someone may Disagree. So, Please Continue to be Encouraged, Continue to Search Deep within. So much more is waiting to be Shared with the world! Be Blessed! Flower Girl, Again, Thank you for sharing, and Be Blessed!

    SILKYTWEED

    06/18/2009

    That poem is a response poem to IF A MAN WANTS YOU, don't know the author, but it certainly is not meant to be a blanket feeling or accusation, but on a expression on a given day, that was what was felt....relationships are hard if we are not sure what purpose we serve and that of our lover....thanks so much for the encouragement...I really appreciate and honor your view expressed.....Peace and Love and Good Writing...ONE!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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