If I could Fly

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    If I could Fly

    If I could fly, I would take you with me,
    high above the troubles of the world.
    Where I could look into your eyes,
    bright from the light of the stars,
    and let you see inside my heart.
    No words would be needed,
    the night would tell it all.
    If only I could fly.

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    countrypoet commented on If I could Fly

    12-10-2009

    Our visions as poets can take us to places we otherwise couldn't reach.I love this very concise and beautifully written romantic poem.

    mamasan commented on If I could Fly

    11-11-2009

    Those words you use tell me that you can fly and may you enjoy that gift to fly about the world's miseries. You are a sensitive gifted bard.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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