I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

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I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS



"I'll slice open my veins to let romance come in",
she whispered in pain as she cut her arm again
every time someone tried to love her she went insane
memories to hard to handle brought nightmares and shame
crying at night all alone she hid sometimes behind the door
not knowing the difference from a nightmare and reality
when the sun rose again there she lay cold on the floor
as he walked in room a scream was heard from him
once more she laid in a hospital bed
as her spirit debated between life and death
unconscious she suddenly mumbled,
"I sliced open my veins to let romance in",
there she died.

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Trista3 commented on I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

12-04-2013

that was potent. very well done. very moving. you truly have a way with words.

poett

12/04/2013

Thank you

MarionYost commented on I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS

02-16-2010

I like the idea behind this one. like the message. -All the best- Marion

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

poett’s Poems (46)

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STARTING ANOTHER YEAR TOGETHER WITH A BLAST 0
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YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING 3
SENTIMENTAL NOSTALGIA 2
WHEN ISABELLA SMILES 4
AN OLD OWL'S HOPE 2
AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES 5
SWEET SMELL OF DANGER 3
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SAD 6
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MY CHOCOLATE LOVE INSANITY 5
CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN? 7
WHAT WOULD YOU DO 6
WITCHY MOM 5
LOVE IS FORGOTTEN 1
THUNDER STORMS WON'T GO AWAY 1
OPEN DOOR 0
A ROSE IS ALL HE LEFT 2
I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS 2
ERES MI MOTIVO - YOU ARE MY MOTIVE 0
A LOVER'S FULL MOON 0
I WAS LEFT IN SOLITUDE 0
I AM SO SMALL IN YOUR HANDS 0
ITS DIFFICULT ( ES DIFICIL) 0
LOVE 1
DEATH STOP TAUNTING ME 0
MI QUERIDA BELLA - MY DEAR BELLA 0
EXCRUCIATING PUNISHMENT 2
WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES 3
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POETRY IS MY LIFE 1
MY IMMORTAL LOVE 0
WELCOME TO HELL 3
Pensive Gaze 1
In My Father's Hands 1
I Am Not Alone 1
I Stand Alone 4
I Wish I Could Just Fly Away 1
To Play 1
Everything Is Collapsing Around Me 0
Lets Divide It By Two 1
You Mean Everything To Me 1
It Only Takes A Minute 2
DEATH 3