I'm Still Here

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Just positive confirmation to myself that all is not over as long as I am still here...

I'm Still Here

It's the complicity of reality
that I grasp for understanding
It's the life that's within me
that I seek the wonders of why
I am in control of my story
but God controls the ending
So I will live and learn
for my purpose is to teach
"WATCH MY LIFE."  IT'S NOT OVER, I'M STILL HERE AND THE SAGA CONTINUES.........

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Ming commented on I'm Still Here

01-12-2011

And so it does . . . good introspect poem . . I like .. -Ming

aliciagall

01/12/2011

there was a time that I had to put all concentration on myself, to literally breathe... Self awareness is the key for the expression of my own thoughts and feelings... I write my life as I feel it.... Thanks for your comment!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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aliciagall’s Poems (25)

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LIFE 0
I REMEMBER 2
MIC CHECK 0
HAWK WHO GOES THERE? 1
It Ain't Right! 5
Where's the Faith? 4
He Doesn't Say Goodnight? 9
I'm Still Here 1
No Stone Thrown 2
DON'T TURN AWAY 18
BE BLESSED 18
HAVE YOU NOT HEARD? 10
SATAN IS HERE 21
YOUNG BROTHER, YOU SLEEP? 12
TO MICHAEL, GONE BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN. 18
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT 8
IT HAS TO BE GOD 14
ACCEPT SANITY 7
I CRY 7
I AM YOUR SISTER 6
I LOVE 14
IT JUST ME 4
Mommy Dearest 6
Drifting By 7