Immortal Love

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    Immortal Love

    Immortal Love

    The love just now discovered is so deep,
    The lives just beginning way to short.
    The love we have, we must make sure to keep.
    If lost our broken hearts will surely hurt.
    But with these words I’m hoping you know,
    That our love needs to eternally grow.
    Inside I feel pain when you’re away.
    Thankful that God gave us another day.

    For eternity I’ll stay by your side,
    The love is forever. It never dies.
    Dead or alive we will be together,
    No matter what might separate us two.

    Nothing can change the love I have for you.
    Immortal, forever, may our love last…

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    houseofbirdsong commented on Immortal Love

    11-26-2008

    Very beautifully spoken my dear.... I can feel your passion.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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