Immortality of Youth

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    the fleeting immortality of youth

    Immortality of Youth

    racing through the garden
    my night of electric mornings
    dip my fingers into tea leaf trees
    and trail currents of green
    i am a brand new thing
    this world has never seen me
    im far to fast to be caught
    my youth is burning inside me
    a well of creativity i cant turn off
    train-thought
    speeds of increasing fantasies
    un-beheld before me
    my ideas are new
    and dreaming unto me
    raging as water rages deep
    above the thrusting curve of the earth
    my time in the garden
    thunderstorms are forgotten
    for the joy of the pain inside me
    it aches to be set free
    to run in the midst of others who flee
    i dash towards insanity
    knowing i will survive
    i have everything to give
    im nothing but alive
    these moments forsaken in the glory of the now
    the power of eternity
    these fields of opportunities harnessed to plow....
    golden meanings and concrete shavings
    im a mix of my fathers hopes and blessings
    there is no redressing
    vomited from this earth like a rocket into space
    there is only the future for me to face

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    gothgirl1218 commented on Immortality of Youth

    07-09-2009

    wow dude thats good no doubt i like it its really good

    BooTz commented on Immortality of Youth

    07-06-2009

    i like this poem very much. it's very raw&very real. the flow is nice.great job ;p

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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