Inspiration (Haiku)

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Inspiration (Haiku)


My beloved muse,

why have you hidden yourself

away from my gaze? 

 

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SuSpence commented on Inspiration (Haiku)

05-06-2010

Very nice, i am new to Haiku myself, but it is challenging. But fun at the same time. Great one! -Spence

simoneaugustus

05/07/2010

Thanks, Spence! I'm glad you like it. :)

ApaqRasgirl commented on Inspiration (Haiku)

05-06-2010

Terrific, great job, thanks for sharing. love Asha

simoneaugustus

05/07/2010

Thanks you so much for the kind words!

MindNumbing commented on Inspiration (Haiku)

05-06-2010

Fantastic... Haiku is one of my favorite forms to read. Anyone who can successfully convey an emotion or vision with only 17 syllables gets a nod from me :) You've done it perfectly... nice job!

simoneaugustus

05/07/2010

Thank you so much! Haiku is one of my favorite styles. If you get a chance, I have most of my haiku poems all together in a collection and would love to hear what you think about them, if you have the time. Thanks again!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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