In a Mans Mind

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In a Mans Mind

It started when i was young,
Girls would come over and steal my heart.
Then leave me and run away,
Am i not good enough?
Is seeing me not worth the time?

Do i call?
Will they care?
They say the jocks are always the players,
But people dont realize they are the ones who get played.
My heart is always getting broken,
Because the girls are trying to protect theirs.
They think every guy is the same,
When i really care.

I'm always used for protection,
She says she feels safe when she is cuddling in my arms.
But once the night is over,
Im the one who isnt safe from harm.

She avoids me,
She never calls.
Then she trys to forget that im her 'protector',
Who is accually the one who needs protection.
I was used and got my heart broken,
But what does it matter?
Beacuse im the 'player',
Who doesnt know how to play the game.

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dahlusion commented on In a Mans Mind

07-26-2010

Lots of honesty and realism in this piece; I can relate deeply...bravo!! Peace and Light, Dah

Mrpoetry commented on In a Mans Mind

06-24-2010

keep writing young lady good poem.........................................

Artie commented on In a Mans Mind

11-17-2009

You know, this is a tell on how you operate - lol - nice piece - I give a 10 for being very thought provoking

poorpoet71 commented on In a Mans Mind

08-20-2009

Great poem! You really capture what its like to be a "sensitive" male. This is very worthy of a 10 from me.

1990lh commented on In a Mans Mind

07-19-2009

great poem it was very unique stlye i love it keep writing

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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