In a Perfect World

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    In a Perfect World


    Close your eyes and imagine, picture this
    if you will.
    A star laden heaven and flowering fields.

    A world with no wars, where we all get along.
    Where peace is the answer and values are strong.

    Where limitations aren't limited, to what's in
    our mind.
    Where harsh words aren't spoken, only those that are kind.

    Where the children are cherished, the elderly
    revered.
    And marriages still last, all through the years.

    Where cancer's the rust, we find on our
    cars.
    And aids could be cured, with the light from
    a star.

    If it were only that easy, to set the world
    right.
    We would all go to heaven, under Gods'
    guiding light.

    Now! open your eyes and make it happen.



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    Lolee commented on In a Perfect World

    09-29-2009

    People think this is a fairy tale. Not so. The Lord said "I go away to prepare a place for you..." and what a place it is! The bible tells in detail about heaven and the new earth. You are right, all we have to do is let God lead us with His guiding light....We live in a world of people who want to lead God, they want to call the shots. When you get the chance will you read my "Just Wouldn't Listen?" It is sort of on the lines of this...sort of. Great Poem....TEN!

    mufasa commented on In a Perfect World

    07-22-2009

    Only "one" person can make a difference. You plant the seed,now others can water it ,and watch it grow into something beautiful. Lovely poem ....moved me to tears, Blessings

    LadyLourdes commented on In a Perfect World

    06-17-2009

    you know i just love that last line!!! make it happen....oh it's on now!!! ;O lol

    HeavenlyAngel commented on In a Perfect World

    01-07-2009

    i wish we could do this, if only.

    letitbee commented on In a Perfect World

    12-31-2008

    Give peace a chance! Well said! Beautiful imagery. =]

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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