In Your Eyes

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    • blackfootlady
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    This poem has been rewritten to satisfie other friends more,Ty.Churv

    In Your Eyes

     I stop and stare...
    Your eyes reveal what I long to know.
    Even when I think your mad.
    The tears I capture when your sad.
    In your eyes I plainly see.
    Your eyes reveal the love for me...
    Knowing this I will always stay.
    When your eyes meet mine.
    In my stare I will always try....
    To see my face in your eyes.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on In Your Eyes

    03-11-2010

    I can relate to this one very much. it remindes me of the times I looked into my loves eyes. oh how I wish I could still look upon his eyes. for now it makes me cry feeling your words. thanks ever so much for this one love Asha
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    blackfootlady

    03/11/2010

    Thats how I feel when I think about my husband.So I can only imagine how you must feel.....TY for the interest....CHURV

    SavVySam commented on In Your Eyes

    12-31-2009

    Indeed eyes are the windows to the soul...To have that love revealed so clearly at a glance! Wonderful! Happy writing!
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    blackfootlady

    03/09/2010

    Hello SavVySam .Ty for your comment.Hope to see you back for my newer writes.

    summerbird commented on In Your Eyes

    12-14-2009

    Good poem, however, the rhyme does not command my attention. It is not clear what you mean when you say - Even when I think your mad. The tears I capture when your sad. Does this person get mad and then cry?
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    blackfootlady

    12/15/2009

    We all get mad and then cry about later in one form or another.Sorry you could not comprehend the poem.Ty for your sincerity.Churv

    gogant commented on In Your Eyes

    12-13-2009

    Those eyes, those revealing eyes, tell us a lot of things, but the one we see and feel the strongest, are the ones that show how much one loves us....................very nice, churv....................g
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    blackfootlady

    12/13/2009

    Ty Gogant.I need help with it but I'm happier with it now.Ty for your comment.Churv

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on In Your Eyes

    12-12-2009

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I LIKE YOUR POEMS. YOUR WORK GETS BETTER THE MORE YOU WRITE THE BETTER YOU GET.GOOD JOB
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    blackfootlady

    12/12/2009

    All my friends helped me by believing in me,TY CHURV

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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