Indian Polis

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Indian Polis

Whatcha doin...say you
Lookin at the map...say me
Why...say you
Cause I want to go back there...say me
Back where River Dove?
Indian Polis...say me
What the hell...say you
Indian Polis....
What are you talkin bout River Dove
You Know Ooopsney...say me
That place we went to...you know
That big city where all them shoppin places are
River Dove we went to a lot of big cities baby
But I don't recall no Indian Polis
Was there Indians there doing a Pow Wow
No Ooopsney, no Indians, no Pow Wow
Ooopsney...why would the Indians pow
Each other....I mean being powed would hurt
No River Dove they don't hurt each other
Well Ooopsney if they pow wow'd me it would hurt
No baby...it wouldn't, a Pow Wow is a dance
A dance...say me....Oh Ooopsney lets pow wow then...
Now wait River Dove what about that place
You were looking up...I never heard of it before
You know Ooopsney its where they have all them
Racing cars...five hundred of them
I swear Ooopsney...I don't know how they fit them all
On the track...that's a lot of cars
Ohhh...say you
River Dove...baby that's not Indian Polis
Oh yes it is Ooopsney, I have the flyer
See....here it is...This word is Indian
And Ooopsney...this word is Polis
River Dove...say you...
Baby...that's Indianapolis
And it isn't five hundred cars...
It's the Indy 500
Well Ooopsney why does this flyer say
Indian Polis... huh....
River Dove.....baby....
See Ooopsney you don't know where it is either.
I'm gonna find it on the map Ooopsney
Cause I want to go there
I don't wanna go to Indianapolis and see the Indy 500
I want to go to Indian Polis and see five hundred cars
Cause I'm holden the flyer that says Indian Polis
Ok my lil bright star...say you...
We'll go to Indian Polis
Yay!!!!!!!!!! Say Me
I love you Ooopsney
Yeah...I love you too River Dove
Ooopsney...say me
Yeah...say you
Pow Wow me baby...say me
Oooo la la...say you

By Rita Kay Webb

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spbsdude commented on Indian Polis

11-24-2010

Very cute and clever. I like the voices you give each of the two characters, Very creative.

koolmom0

11/24/2010

Thank you very much, they are my lil characters. :) Rita

MindNumbing commented on Indian Polis

11-23-2010

HAHA!!! This is too sweet, Rita!! I'm from Indian Polis, and I have some firsthand knowledge of them there 500 cars ;)

koolmom0

11/23/2010

LOL Thank you for reading for me, that's a whole lota cars...:) Rita

Olan01 commented on Indian Polis

11-23-2010

Dialog is hard to do and maintain a since of humor. Olan say, "Thank you and I went to the Polis to shop the other day."

koolmom0

11/23/2010

LOL I'm glad you went to the Polis to shop Olan, did you happen to see Ooopsney n River Dove? LOL Thank you for reading for me. :) Rita

gogant commented on Indian Polis

11-22-2010

I forgot to throw in........Indian (ap) Polis......cute............I say.....or was it ooopsney ???

koolmom0

11/22/2010

Shoot G...you have me confused now...say me.....hahahahah!!

gogant commented on Indian Polis

11-22-2010

You've mixed it up enough to keep me wondering about your sanity.....ooopsney, I say....hey you say.....that's good, I say......

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