Insane?

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  • Confusion

    Insane?

    I search for an exit,
    some kind of release.
    A place for love,
    a place for peace.

    I circle the room
    searching for holes.
    Am I in a room,
    that nobody knows?

    Touch the walls,
    find the door.
    Something that seems,
    to be there no more.

    Locked in this room.
    Locked in this place.
    No release,
    and no escape.

    Am I lost
    in my own mind?
    Lost in a world,
    of a different kind.

    There is a ceiling,
    there if a floor.
    A circular room,
    that holds no door?

    I figured it out,
    I've gone crazy.
    I knew this would happen,
    It's all real hazy.

    I'm finished now,
    I've become insane.
    So for now,
    I'll lay in the rain.

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    commonreactor commented on Insane?

    04-02-2010

    well done! you have captured the feeling so well ... glad you shared this

    nottus commented on Insane?

    05-22-2009

    i like it! i think it all flows together very well. also thanks for taking the time to read my poems!

    Johnstradamus commented on Insane?

    01-31-2009

    i've read two of yours now and i hope writing is an outlet that relieves some of your kept emotions and puts you back with us. you describe your mania so well. it's a good poem but hard to read. i'm sure someone who cares about you might have a pret

    kenparme commented on Insane?

    01-25-2009

    I like this poem alot-it really captures the emotions--nice job.

    lonewolf commented on Insane?

    01-25-2009

    Beautiful Em!! Very well done.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Emilia’s Poems (17)

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    Mask 0
    Found. 2
    Fit In 1
    Imaginary 0
    Destiny 1
    Empty 2
    Mental Warning 0
    Life 0
    Distance 1
    Keep going 2
    God's Tears? 1
    Heart 3
    Insane? 7
    A Game? 9
    Dead.... 5
    Death or Freedom? 4