Is It Me

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    Is It Me

    I must be crazy or maybe idiot is branded across my forehead.
     
    In your ignorance you believe I enjoy being taken for a fool.

    Those few that fancy themselves intelligent underestimate my ability to be a prolific enemy.

    Unspeakable wrath has taken lesser people down completely unaware.

    Shocked that vengeance has surrounded them leaving no where to run.

    Is it me or am I crazy thinking forced captivity could change an unfeeling heart.

    Expecting fear to clear a muddled mind.

    Undeserved threats and thoughtless lies have weakened my soul.
     
    Turned this loving heart ever so cold.

     Running scared from fatherhood, blinded by the thought of a life so settled nearly cost you this happy home.

    Is it me that believes the rumors and insignificant mutterings of those jealous cretins.

     Whose biggest desire in life is to cause ruin and strife to our happiness.

    Worst of all you allowed their senseless noise to remove you from my side and nearly from my heart.

    Even through the endless clutter I call my life.

    I have yet to find one of your immature actions unforgivable.

    Not even the fact that my dreams of family life with a pampering partner being shattered has changed my love for you......

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    TCpoeboy commented on Is It Me

    10-21-2009

    I love to read reality poetry. When a person can express and bare their most intimate details of their emotions it makes them seem so immortal. Good write!

    lucky62

    10/21/2009

    ty tc I like that 1 myself

    Charlie23 commented on Is It Me

    09-06-2009

    I don't know why I always try to understand everyone's point, but I contemplated a bit as I read through the lines and kinda thought "is it me" referred to you at times and other times at Satan. Not sure if that's how you meant for it to be read.

    lucky62

    09/06/2009

    a friend of mine has a crappy husband I try to bring the feelings of a lover and father of your children can turn hatred and disgust on an undeserving pregnant wife. this from her point of view......

    tierra7 commented on Is It Me

    08-02-2009

    WOW! so intense...so well written "Not even the fact that my dreams of family life with a pampering partner being shattered has changed my love for you......" very powerful loaded words...thank you 4 sharin'...t-7

    lucky62

    08/10/2009

    I wrote this from a womens view for a friend of mine cause her husband will never be a man or learn to be one. Glad you enjoyed my little rant fest for her.......

    cherise1 commented on Is It Me

    04-21-2009

    this all sounds so familiar its great though i liked it very much. im sure all the others i read are just as good

    billyfrsico commented on Is It Me

    04-11-2009

    i thought it was just me that saw the paragenuis (para= outside) for what he was. the idiotology ( the science of being a fuckwit)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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