Is it worth it


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Is it worth it

As I laid in my bed the other night I began to have a dangerous thought. If I hung myself with a belt noone would notice nor would I get caught. I counsolled a circle of friends with this predicimemt as I usually do. After talking to individuals for a period of time the fact that i needed help became sadly true. Over the last few days I began to ask myself is it worth it to do such a thing because of others? Why would I want to do such a thing because of people with evil mothers? Could I really be considering suicide because of the things that are deep inside my mind? Why yes my friends I could because to me life has been so unkind. Is it worth it to be me in a world full of so much hate and rage? Is anything going to ever improve even after my foot has healed and I could stop feeling like an animal at a zoo stuck in a cage. Is it worth it to leave behind my family and friends? Would any of them care or just see it as inevitable that life has to end. Is it worth it to leave behind a future that might not be so bright? Well my friends that's a question I ask myself even tonight. So I lay here in my bed wondering if taking my life is worth it and for true. As I wonder this I figure that until I get help it is time for me to say goodbye to all of you

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am2anangel commented on Is it worth it


dan my friend this is very sad in the telling. sadly these thoughts haunt far too many people. I like you am too often forced to show the happy face on the outside, while raging with hurt within. well done.-tonya

Artie commented on Is it worth it


Your feelings are normal. So many feel like they just want to give up. Like something better waits on the "other side." If you feel like your life is a chore, change it, don't end it. You only have one shot at this. Great write - 10 from me

Mandi commented on Is it worth it


Dan, try the experience of giving...give of yourself to others helpsless and in need When you occupy yourself with helping oothers then it works wonders for your mind and your heart. YOu are a wonderful writer. very exppressive .. Try to bring joy into your life by talking of joyful things... give to a child who is hugry, or sick, or dying give of your time, give from the heart try writing happy things, look hafrd , you can find them

anderneglakay commented on Is it worth it


i personally like it because its real pure and truth

boogiewu commented on Is it worth it


well spoken ......just another brick in the wall of our minds

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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