It Ain't Right!

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God moves in his time. How patience are you? Can you wait for favor? Do you have what it takes to wait on God to move in any circumstance? There are women that have faith and will weather the storm believing that God will take over and she will reap the benefits...

It Ain't Right!


You know it ain't right when your worlds uptight and you hold on tight but no ends in sight, you know it ain't right

when you're on your knees, you beg you plead but your heart is bleeding from the lines he feeding, you know it ain't right

when the woman inside, she screams she's crying but he keeps on lying and you keep denying, something ain't right

when you wish him dead from the tears you've shed, all you see is red, dam it ain't right

when you put up a fuss with the words you cuss but it's not enough it can't be right

when he says it's not so and he knows you know but you can't let go you say it ain't right 

if to God you pray and the bible say that he shouldn't stray and he does anyway he knows it ain't right

when you weather the storm move outside the norm and wait on God to reform who said it ain't right?

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Ming commented on It Ain't Right!

03-18-2011

Good write, I like this piece very much, and "That's Right" -Ming

aliciagall

02/12/2012

LOL Thanks Ming...

Mrpoetry commented on It Ain't Right!

01-28-2011

brotha's like me are a rare kind, but we are not hard to find, we have been there every step of the way, but we could not get the time of day. instead we got the cold shoulder, so we waited until we got older, then the women wanted to come around, but by then it was too late, because our queen we have found written by Marvin Crutchfield

aliciagall

01/28/2011

I see you are the creator of your comment... Very clever... I like... Thank you for your comment!

FranzJ commented on It Ain't Right!

01-26-2011

well said - women everywhere ought to take head to this - - - - - - -

aliciagall

01/26/2011

Some women have... Women with STRONG FAITH but even with faith it's a hard walk when you trust in man instead of GOD... Thanks for your comment...

aliciagall

01/28/2011

Not every woman has the faith and endurance... Thanks for your comment!

optimistic commented on It Ain't Right!

01-26-2011

Guys are not in there right mind when it comes to playing with the heart until they get played with the same hurt they try to love with. In the end all will do you justice with the fabulous poem you were able to write it flowed smoothly.

aliciagall

01/26/2011

So true for both men and women... Thanks for your comment.

HarverTomsson commented on It Ain't Right!

01-24-2011

Inspirational tribute to women of faith. It isn't always the guy who is the provacateur, however. Good write. Harv

aliciagall

01/24/2011

Very true women are not always the victims. Men have their share of grief but as most of my poem this is personal experience... Thanks for your comment...

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

aliciagall’s Poems (25)

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GOD WE NEED TO HEAR FROM YOU 2
LIFE 0
I REMEMBER 2
MIC CHECK 0
HAWK WHO GOES THERE? 1
It Ain't Right! 5
Where's the Faith? 4
He Doesn't Say Goodnight? 9
I'm Still Here 1
No Stone Thrown 2
DON'T TURN AWAY 18
BE BLESSED 18
HAVE YOU NOT HEARD? 10
SATAN IS HERE 21
YOUNG BROTHER, YOU SLEEP? 12
TO MICHAEL, GONE BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN. 18
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT 8
IT HAS TO BE GOD 14
ACCEPT SANITY 7
I CRY 7
I AM YOUR SISTER 6
I LOVE 14
IT JUST ME 4
Mommy Dearest 6
Drifting By 7