It’s Over!"

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I thought you were the one.. Maybe I was wrong, Yes, I am wrong for you are not he?

It’s Over!"

My searchm it’s Over..,

I have reached the end of my road

Through hills and valleys, I have toiled.

Alone the way, so many times,

I’ve kissed too many princely toads.

 

It started such a long time ago,

Traveling toward womanhood,

I wanted feel loved, but don’t we all?

I was bright, carefree, and all aglow

 

There must be love somewhere for me

Single and free can I ever become we? 

So many times I prayed to God

Would I be granted that exact plea?

 

Now I’m older yet single still, how cold,

I wonder if this life is real?

Soulmates exist they told me so

Yet I don’t have a man to love and to hold.

 

Silly girl you’ve been there before

I know because you told me so.

Just reminding you only,

But who’s keeping score?

 

Now you say it’s was like red dover?

It was beautiful, short-lived, but soon over.

 

The road stopped as the snow’s flurry

Searching for him so icy glazed over.

Going it alone is my sad story.

I have seen downs and I have seen glory.

The road to nowhere is my all over.

No left still looking in all the wrong places?






Copyright © October 27,2010, CatsMeow
 

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cousinsoren commented on It’s Over!"

03-03-2011

he road stopped as the snow’s flurry Searching for him so icy glazed over. Going it alone is my sad story. I have seen downs and I have seen glory. The road to nowhere is my all over. No left still looking in all the wrong places? I love this stanza, Perfectly composed experiential poetry/ "Now you say it’s was like red dover? It was beautiful, short-lived, but soon over" A perfectly composed and poignant simile. On the whole a poem of regret,tragic in tone, theme well developed, consistent with the title of the poem. Masterly show of style. Some good advice here from Devaamido. .........LOL.

devaamido commented on It’s Over!"

12-18-2010

I feel the hunger. The first thing you've gotta do is learn to be good to yourself. Buy some new clothes... be a little daring... fix up your apartment. Do something fun... & do it for yourself. You'll find people will be attracted to you. Be courteous to everybody who's attracted to you, even if you're not interested in them. Put all you heart in that for 30 days & I'll bet you get more action than the last 6 months. Nice poem.

Chaos128 commented on It’s Over!"

11-30-2010

A bittersweet perspective, CM. Sometimes you can't find what you're looking for because you're looking too hard. Sit back, relax and let the tide come to you (of course, in order for the tide can come to you, you've got to go to the beach). I like it : )

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on It’s Over!"

10-27-2010

The search for love and the up and down disappointments is well illustrated here. Great write, I loved it. Continue your self love and don't give up the search. Just change the way you go about. ;-)......E

CatsMeow

10/27/2010

Thanks for the read... But my looking rime is up..LOL

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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