It's Crazy

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  • ShanneN
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It's Crazy

This is more than love.
I want nothing but you.
Soon you will see my love,
everything I say is true.

This life is about you, and I.
Us. together.
Marriage. Children.
It's real, It's us.

"Nothing in this world could stop me from staring at you."
because with you i could swing life away.
I am in love with you, in every way.
The ring, it's BEAUTIFUL!

Your love, is beautiful.
everything about you,
I LOVE YOU.

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countryboy1988 commented on It's Crazy

12-30-2010

you wrote as if you were speaking from your soul, the words describe a love that is so pure and true, its kinda as if its a fairy tale, i wish you the best of luck and happiness along the way

ShanneN

12/30/2010

Thank you, very much! :)

danmartyjake1 commented on It's Crazy

12-23-2010

You captured a purity and an essence of young love within this poem that is so special and unique. Bravo!

HarverTomsson commented on It's Crazy

12-23-2010

Sweet, innocent, and brilliant with the light of hope. May your sun never go down. Harv

angelchaser commented on It's Crazy

11-29-2010

I couldn't be happier for you, Shannen:) May your life together know nothing but peace, love and happiness. *hugs*

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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