It's Not Suicide

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    It's Not Suicide

    I want to fall
    Apart just to
    See what it’s
    Like to despair
    Truly wrong
    My dear
    It’s not suicide
    It’s just curiosity
    Tainted with
    Blood
    Lie too much
    The fun will
    Come
    Dear misery,
    Set me free
    Should I dare
    To dream again
    When that was
    What took it all
    Away from me?
    Should I shy
    Away a destiny
    I have the chance
    To shape,
    Running gets you
    Nowhere,
    Face it
    The world has
    Darkened in your
    Cynical eyes
    A twisted smirk
    A faint remark
    A whisper of the
    Past
    A ripple of hurt
    Your inhumane laugh
    Resounds through
    History’s latest attraction
    Wait for the crash
    A high so delicious
    It’s almost painful
    To come back down
    Times have changed
    Everything’s become
    A complication
    Hard to make it
    Through another
    Day’s humiliation
    Darkness shall be
    Born from light
    Answers to the unknown
    Questions ahead
    Beware your latest
    Fantasy catered to
    Wary is what you
    Should be considering
    What you wish for
    World wide renowned
    Faint inklings
    Follow your instincts
    Your heart knows
    Not of what your
    Brain has been
    Dwelling upon
    Half-hearted soul
    Shatter the remains
    Smile,
    It’s not suicide,
    It’s curiosity
    Tainted in blood.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~


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    hdmac commented on It's Not Suicide

    09-02-2009

    Well I think it's a slow suicide. It's a slow spiral downward. Interesting poetry. I am glad you let out your feelings.

    Platti

    09/02/2009

    Thank you for the feedback! It's greatly appreciated =D

    lightcourier commented on It's Not Suicide

    05-01-2009

    You continue to have a very intriging way of writing. I enjoyed the almost casual explanation. The form was halting almost like breathing between thoughts. Good work! Thanks!

    Drivingczar commented on It's Not Suicide

    04-21-2009

    It's similar to a blind high dive, free falling ... dreaming! Not wanting to wake until the dream is complete! Excellent write!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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