Jake's Haiku Collection

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  • Astrology Haiku Collectio

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    He loves the planets and astrology.  These were graded 100/A+ in 2002.  Just thougt I would share.  Hope you enjoy them as much as I did.

    Jake's Haiku Collection

     Jupiter my friend
    Almost a star, beautiful
    your storm is ancient!



    The sun is shining
    Giving life to everyone
    Food and warmth and fun.



    Sun, water, air, life
    Oceans, rivers, mountainsides
    You are mother earth.

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    ChrisP commented on Jake's Haiku Collection

    11-21-2009

    this is very zen. well written and concieved. I alway love waiting for your new words. Everything you attempt is pure and filled with soul.
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    Tempestlady

    11/21/2009

    Loved your Einstein piece! Truly ingeniuous! Write on...Thanks again for your complimentary comments. write on...

    Madelynn commented on Jake's Haiku Collection

    09-07-2009

    Out of the mouths of babes!right?-These are precious poetic gems your son has created!-Thank you for sharing this!!My favorite actually is the last one-third.I love the life he brought with this-addressing Mother Earth,so personally.Jake seems just wonderful!
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    Tempestlady

    11/21/2009

    He is and has always been a wonderful blessing in my life. Thanks for your kind and heartfelt comments. Write on...

    WordSlinger commented on Jake's Haiku Collection

    09-07-2009

    I like these, the first one is so good it will last forever with the right publisher, nice work Jake.
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    Tempestlady

    11/21/2009

    He is overwhelmed with your generous comments. Thanks How to publish though?

    Vincent commented on Jake's Haiku Collection

    09-07-2009

    WTG Jake, keep the ink flowing smoothly, Smiles VIncent
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    ginga commented on Jake's Haiku Collection

    09-03-2009

    Yeah Jake these are striking and beautiful! ginga
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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