January 7, 2011, 11:18 AM

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    • Past the ocean, and into the clouds, we sail into the sun...

    January 7, 2011, 11:18 AM
    Crash into me,
    Let us become one,
    None of the good,
    Only the bad.
    Fly with me,
    Against the wind,
    See how far we get,
    Or find out just how lost,
    We really are.
    Take a turn,
    Away from the norm,
    Off the main road,
    And even the one less taken.
    Let us make our own path,
    So others might follow,
    And lead them astray.
    Let us crash and burn,
    Into the sun,
    Or into the ground,
    It makes no difference.
    We each hold our own,
    Neither showing first,
    Both going last,
    Not willing to fold.
    Views distorted,
    Weaved in lies,
    Wrapped in stories,
    Sealed with a bow,
    Delivered with purpose.
    Are you my gift,
    Or my curse?
    So let us see;
    Are we right?
    Are we wrong?
    Is there a difference?

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    labitch commented on January 7, 2011, 11:18 AM

    05-16-2011

    The more I read you, the more I love our paradoxes and innocent wish to be cynical
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    poptart commented on January 7, 2011, 11:18 AM

    01-14-2011

    amazing write i felt wat you were trying to say i could tell your feelings...good job
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on January 7, 2011, 11:18 AM

    01-07-2011

    I like how the poem flows all the way to the end on how the questions provoke thought. I felt like does it make a difference for what is right can be wrong, and what is wrong can be right in the world of perception.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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