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  • Lost Love

    Jay

    I miss you the last moments were trashed moments
    Because I lacked the ability to retain or decifer
    HIs screaming words ancient as a bible
    I'm cold,I'm stifled, My love couldn't melt the rifle
    I'd melt the rifle you'd still feel the way you felt I could'nt melt the........
    JAY WHERE EVER YOU WENT I'M BENT FOREVER
    MY SOUL LOVES YOU,BY TERRIBLE DEFAULT IT WASN'T ENOUGH

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    StandingBear commented on Jay

    08-21-2009

    A very deep loss when a loved one has passed. Our hearts are with you.

    cliftondurant commented on Jay

    07-01-2009

    Love is a beautiful thing when you give love you want love in return it was his lost great poem

    kdavidscott1 commented on Jay

    06-27-2009

    A great poem explaining how much you miss a loved one... KD

    AIXA commented on Jay

    03-26-2009

    Loosing a love is winning a new experience in life

    streetprophit11 commented on Jay

    03-21-2009

    I can almost feel the pain and emotion in your word. Its that powerful.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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