Judgement Day


  • Angst
  • ,
  • Life

    Judgement Day

    It's been quite a while now
    since you first left me.
    I'm not here to judge you,
    but your presence still I see.
    I can't call you a liar,
    though you never tell the truth.
    Deceptions your occupation.
    I've got scars if you want proof.

    Your closet's still quite full,
    while my pocket's still quite bare.
    The debts fill up the table,
    absent of dining fare.
    Your days of disappointment,
     while mine are full of glee.
    It's been quite a while now,
    since you first left me.

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    dahlusion commented on Judgement Day


    This piece is as poignant as any that relates to separation. It strikes like a stinger. Good job on getting the point across. DAH

    bluewolf commented on Judgement Day


    I like the build of dialogue and emotions between two people who have gone their separate ways. Good job building emotional mood.

    gailkindler commented on Judgement Day


    I like the seeming contradiction between lines 5&6. It gives a better feeling both of the subject and possibly the poet.

    toredbloodink commented on Judgement Day


    I loved this write... I guess I related by some bad break ups ... Maybe different but still the same bitter sweet feeling.....

    Plot121 commented on Judgement Day


    the read is close to my style and shows a great deal of emotion. good work

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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