July 16, 2010, 1:28 PM

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    • Past the ocean, and into the clouds, we sail into the sun...

    July 16, 2010, 1:28 PM
    We write our lyrics and paint our art,
    Express our feelings with an open heart.
    Hide it all away,
    Safe from the world we stay.
    Build our walls and burn our bridges,
    Solitude found hidden in ridges.
    Fly away from me as I run away from you,
    See who gets farther from the truth we knew.
    Minds attacking each other as the day begins to dawn,
    Forget it all and start again with our morning yawn.

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    brokenhearted11 commented on July 16, 2010, 1:28 PM

    10-27-2010

    along with rhymer, i too love the style this shows. the syllables are absolutely perfect, one thing i look for in a rhyme. i love your creative eye in your poetry, it shows how you view the world. awesome job. keep writing:)
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    Rhymer commented on July 16, 2010, 1:28 PM

    07-22-2010

    I enjoy your style and your creative pen. Excellent piece. 10 from me.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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