Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

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  • Friendship

    Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

    All you want to do is fight

    I don’t believe it’s right

    Confrontation is something I really do not like

    We should be there for each other

    But we’re growing distant

    We’re supposed to be friends

    But I’m not sure what this is

    I say bad things about you to people who I trust

    I know you say the same things

    But to strangers, in a rush

    Every day is stressful

    When we are on “good” terms

    I never feel you like me

    Always something I must earn

    Friendships shouldn’t be like that

    All along I’ve known it

    If you really cherished me, you would’ve somehow shown it

    I CAN believe that you would leave me behind for some guy

    You’ve hid it in the past but now, you don’t even try

    I see where this is headed

    It’s coming to an end

    I used to feel that I could trust you

    But can no longer call you “friend”

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    Sx9 commented on Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

    07-29-2010

    this hurt and hurt bad,,to loose a lover friend,,we all have vibes like this,,straight up and to the point,,keep the pen working,,walk good..
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    Insideme commented on Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

    05-21-2010

    I loved reading this, it was enlightening and beautifully honest
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    Worthless commented on Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

    05-21-2010

    yeah... Who knows what love and friends and family really is anymore? No one seems to appreciate and no one wants to care. We all know life ain't fair.
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    SuSpence commented on Just Let It Be. Please Let Me Leave.

    05-21-2010

    Fantastic Allegra! I have certainley been there more times in my life then I care to remember. I could really feel the angst and frustration in this piece. And I am left feeling sad for you :( but this reminds me of a great quote from a brilliant man. 'The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones that are worth suffering for.' ~Bob Marley...keep your head up Allegra and keep writing, you are so talented. ~Spence
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    Allegra

    05/21/2010

    Thanks buddy. Yeah it's freakin frustrating! But it's not the first time. Thanks for the encouragement.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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