Keeping Love UP

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    A friendly reminder on TOLERATION

    Keeping Love UP
    He  Loves  Me,  
    She  Loves  Me
    We  Loves  Me,  
    They  Loves  Me
    Showing  No  Love,
     Questioning  Why Not  2b?
    I  thought  we  are  family
    Having  brothers  and  sisters  with  me
    From  way   back  in  the  dayz  was  played
    Signifying  the  basking  and  keeping  Love  Up  Always
    In  so  many  ways,  supporting ……..
    TOLERATION 
    East, West,  North  and   South
    All  points  to  the  Meridian  of  Humanity
    Although  I turn  left  to  protect  my rights
    Never  understanding  the  rights  of  those  
    Portraying  right  next  to  me ……
    Some  left-handed,  some  right-handed
    Some  black-handed  others  white  handed
    Putting  Love  Up  is  how  we  must  join  hands
    TOLERATION
    Respect  is  due  when  keeping   Love  Up  and  in  Landing
    In  understanding  the  next  person’s  issues  or  difference
    For  instance,  
    Gay,
     Straight, 
    Going  Both  Ways  or 
     Knowing  Only One  Way
    TOLERATION  
    Is  Keeping  Love  Up  and  Without  Inhibition
    Conditions  change  refining  ways  and  means
    Does  not  mean anything  can  go  between
    TOLERATION
    That  is  not  how  Love  is  Kept
    In  supporting  wars,  abuse  or   theft
    Rapes,  Prejudicial  Judgments  or  in  repeating  historically
    Conquesting  immorally, religious  vainglory, censoring  stories
    Writes  of  just  your   story?
    TOLERATION
    Must  be  held  up  in   Love
    Must  be  with   Love
    TOLERATION…..is  Keeping  Love  Up
    TOLERATION  and  Keeping  Love  Up 
    IS  A  GIFT  AND  A  DIVINE  CHOICE  OF  BLESSING  FROM  ABOVE
    And  Within……
    TOLERATION  equals  ONE  LOVE!!!
    Keeping  Love  UP………Because  We  Are  All  God’s  Children!!
    He  Loves  Me,  
    She  Loves  Me
    We  Loves  Me,  
    They  Loves  Me
    Showing  No  Love,
    Questioning  Why Not  2b?
    I  thought  we  are  family
    Having  brothers  and  sisters  with  me
    From  way   back  in  the  dayz  was  played
    Signifying  the  basking  and  keeping  Love  Up  Always
    In  so  many  ways,  supporting ……..
    TOLERATION 
    East, West,  North  and   South
    All  points  to  the  Meridian  of  Humanity
    Although  I turn  left  to  protect  my rights
    Never  understanding  the  rights  of  those  
    Portraying  right  next  to  me ……
    Some  left-handed,  some  right-handed
    Some  black-handed  others  white  handed
    Putting  Love  Up  is  how  we  must  join  hands
    TOLERATION
    Respect  is  due  when  keeping   Love  Up  and  in  Landing
    In  understanding  the  next  person’s  issues  or  difference
    For  instance,  
    Gay,
    Straight, 
    Going  Both  Ways  or 
    Knowing  Only One  Way
    TOLERATION  
    Is  Keeping  Love  Up  and  Without  Inhibition
    Conditions  change  refining  ways  and  means
    Does  not  mean anything  can  go  between
    TOLERATION
    That  is  not  how  Love  is  Kept
    In  supporting  wars,  abuse  or   theft
    Rapes,  Prejudicial  Judgments  or  in  repeating  historically
    Conquesting  immorally, religious  vainglory, censoring  stories
    Writes  of  just  your   story?
    TOLERATION
    Must  be  held  up  in   Love
    Must  be  with  Love
    TOLERATION…..is  Keeping  Love  Up
    TOLERATION  and  Keeping  Love  Up 
    IS  A  GIFT  AND  A  DIVINE  CHOICE  OF  BLESSING  FROM  ABOVE
    And  Within……
    TOLERATION  equals  ONE  LOVE!!!
    Keeping  Love  UP………Because  We  Are  All  God’s  Children!!

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    alejapoet commented on Keeping Love UP

    12-11-2009

    thismpoem says a lot but you really need to reword it. Just keep writing what you feel and it will get better
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    SILKYTWEED

    12/11/2009

    Thanks, I appreciate your comments and I'm further encouraged!!

    jademelissa74 commented on Keeping Love UP

    12-09-2009

    Powerful, simply powerful! You hit the nail on the head with this one. It is motivational to the reader. A well deciphered topic. Great job!
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    SILKYTWEED

    12/09/2009

    Thank you jademelissa74...glad for you sharing your thoughts...I agree...Thank you!

    Chaos128 commented on Keeping Love UP

    12-08-2009

    You’ve expressed it too well, Brother Silk; I would say there is not one of us that doesn’t realize your answer is the correct one. But the game is all about smoke, mirrors and misdirection, and too often we go for the okey-doke even though we know it for what it is; like making a deal for better results in a zero-sum game. Not only is the answer too easy, but you’ve got to admit that you are not point around which existence pivots, just a part of it. You hit the nail on the head, S, and I know you know how uncomfortable that makes people ha ha! Tee Ee En!
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    SILKYTWEED

    12/09/2009

    No doubt Brother Chaos, but the pen carries and wages war regardless, determined to be a part of a solution, not just jotting down further problems...(smile) Thanks for reading...ONE

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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