King & Queen of Broken Hearts
Brand new deck,
Split the pack,
I’ll bite your neck,
You’ll stab my back.
When that feeling starts,
Our hands are shown-
We’ll both break our hearts,
But we’ll never be alone.
King & Queen of Broken Hearts
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blvdobd2009 commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts
12-09-2010
- Wow, that to me really was discovery....How do you learn to say so much in so few words...That is such a gift....I feel this way almost everyday when I see my boyfriends face....I have the exact same emotion as you have so brilliantly capture...My Goodness....I loved this read
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knight4696 commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts
11-10-2010
- Very Clevr AP! :) I like cards .. but love Chess, being a Knight and all .. well Sometimes its best to shuffle before splitting the pack. lol! Love the metaphor! Great job! :) Ken
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stefy commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts
10-15-2010
- Hi young guy! I noticed that you`re very talented.this is nice description and i like the metaphor in it.....a clever message indeed:)
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10/16/2010
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lustfulsoul commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts
10-14-2010
- The metaphorical content speaks loudly. At face value, this piece offers acceptance of what's there to come, "I’ll bite your neck, you’ll stab my back". Yet, the poem can lead the reader to many routes for discussion. Well done.
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10/14/2010
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WordSlinger commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts
10-05-2010
- Heaven ya, what a great perspective, lol, jokers in the deck??? ty WS
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10/14/2010
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