King Forever

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    just my basic day...lol...

    King Forever

    weariness bone deep
    in my feet
    i cant stand
    grimace
    massage
    gravity is such a bitch
    somedays
    id rather lie in bed
    just day dream and daze
    the moon is sickly
    yellow
    humid in july
    bugs buzz
    land
    swelter
    trunks full of sand
    beach sighs and soughs
    half a mile away
    im lounge lizard
    like
    find the sunny spot
    on the hot rock
    vodka empties
    goes
    glug glug glug
    splash of juice
    lone melting cube
    stretch out
    crank the tunes
    good vibes
    radiate
    penetrate
    exhaustion melts
    high tonight
    before the firelight
    might walk on the wet rocks
    or take a quick dip in the salt sea
    keep my drink full
    my heart mellow
    optimistic fever
    sweat breaks out
    find a cool girl to kiss
    a nice shade tree
    silence fills
    soars over me
    everyday
    treat myself like a king

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    KING commented on King Forever

    06-16-2010

    I like the way youve made a normal day your best day, even if it is the same over and over and even if its routine. It doesnt stop you from being on top of the world, KING. Good stuff man.

    AmadeusEx

    06/16/2010

    perception is the key to having a shitty life or a rewarding life, whether its a sober one or an "enlightened" one...self medication and hard work always lead to regrets, mistakes, pivotal moments, great joy and great sadness...a perfect life...and the struggle is worth it, the struggle to succeed and the need to fail sometimes just to be lost...eh...thanks for the comment king, keep reading my stuff if you like it "

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