Kissed By a Shadow

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    Kissed By a Shadow

    Poem-3:
    Write a poem of 16 to 24 lines that is a conceit. That means the complete poem will be based one metaphor. The opening should set up the premise for the poem. But the title does not have to state the premise but at least it should be present in the first stanza. Write the poem in quatrains. The closure should relate to both sides of the metaphor in some way without revealing the deeper meaning of the poem. The closure needs to tie the opening and turning point together in some way to form a new concept.



    I was kissed by a shadow.
    On a summer day, when the
    Sun shone in the bright sky, she
    Sneaked from a tree, and kissed me.

    Kissed me on my cheek, and neck
    And every spot on my face,
    And lips and eyes, and my nose.
    Tenderly, I was kissed, by

    A shadow, that left no trace:
    For, of all the parts she kissed,
    She did not kiss my heart
    And shadowy kisses fade,

    Like a puff of smoke scatters,
    Throughout the universe,
    Only to be forgotten;
    When I recall, Her wet kisses.

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    WordSlinger commented on Kissed By a Shadow

    05-02-2010

    I like this alot::, This poem is awesome, I found nothing up or down ty WS

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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