Lame poem

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Lame

    Lame poem

    It's cold, dark and raining,
    and my feet hurt...                     (H)

      If i march to your drum,
    I'd make the beat worse...            (u)  

      I'd fight the monster inside,
    but i need sleep first...                 (r)

      I think it's funny at times,
    to watch my mind work...             (t)

      Seem always stuck in a rut,
    cause of this dam curse...             (i)
     
     Need to dive right in,
    but I'll go feet first...                    (n)

     Shouldn't have to spell it out,
    like in a cheap verse...                 (g)

       I'll let it build up inside, 
    until my heart burst

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    1990lh commented on Lame poem

    09-26-2009

    haha yeah that was cool it was different but different is great nice job

    Crush commented on Lame poem

    09-25-2009

    very very cool....different and well paced. thanks

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    stealingnov’s Poems (4)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Watch the rain 0
    Not going back 4
    Lame poem 2
    Walk within the shadows 2