Last Goodbye

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    Last Goodbye

    No fancy words,
    No fleeting touches,
    The briefest of jaded
    Smiles,
    I'll set you free,
    We'll never mean
    Enough to each other
    Only the tightening of
    My heart tells me
    This is the last goodbye
    No more coming back,
    No more lies,
    The fights will
    Finally cease
    This is the
    Last goodbye
    The cries in the middle
    Of the night,
    I've finally found
    Salvation,
    Fleeing emotions,
    May they follow
    You out the door
    This is the
    Last Goodbye
    No longer will
    The eggshells
    Lay about,
    No agreements,
    No "I'll see you later",
    The last goodbye
    You should have
    Seen It coming
    From A Mile away.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    Gracey commented on Last Goodbye

    08-14-2009

    This is really cool and drenched in emotion :) Thimbs up matie :)

    Gracey

    08/14/2009

    LOL thumbs :)

    Platti

    08/14/2009

    thank you! :D

    Platti

    08/14/2009

    thank you! :D

    Platti

    08/14/2009

    thank you! :D

    Platti

    08/14/2009

    Dang thing posting it over and over again! D=

    StandingBear commented on Last Goodbye

    08-06-2009

    The traumatic separation of a young couple in love. Sting sang it best ... *if you love someone set them free*. *free, free .. set them free* *-------------------------------------* Another great write Running Fox.

    Platti

    08/07/2009

    Thank you!!! :D

    Helios commented on Last Goodbye

    08-04-2009

    Truely a display of deep emotions written for the modern times.

    Platti

    08/04/2009

    Thank you! :)

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