LET IT GO!!

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  • Dark Poetry
    • Ecdysis
    • I am the sand that pours down the hour glass awaiting to know if I'm half empty or half full, i am usurped by the power of time...

    LET IT GO!!
    My life stream's a question mark...

    And a sentence is what I seek...

    Something to give me purpose...
     
    Just a good enough reason to get on my feet...

    I went to bed feeling poetic...

    And woke up wondering how will I eat...

    This is a painful but intermittent appetite...

    That can't be appeased with vegetables nor meat...

    My life stream's a question mark...

    And a sentence is what I seek...

    Let,
    was my first word, and a definition came to front street...

    To give opportunity to, or to fail to prevent...

    A pointless redundancy of a word I already know...

    But there is a meaning beyound this word...
     
    Perhaps in a sentence, it whispered...

    "You'll have listen in order to know"... 

    My life stream's a question mark...

    And a sentence is what I seek...

    The 2nd word It, describes the predicament that I must beat...

    A subject or direct object or indirect object of a verb...

    Teaching me all problems must have a source; 

    detachment is the solutions ultimate goal...

    But value is heavily taught and yet still not learned there after...

    You can buy, sale or steal a soul; manipulate the mind to a certain degree...

    But can the heart switch sides if love paints a picture oh so perfectly...

    My life stream's a question mark...

    And a sentence is what I seek...

    I've received my sentence, Go was the inevitable ending piece...

    It is a certain course or certain precedural plan when the end is the end...

    Life just began, especially because I know Jesus is coming...

    Stress not, for life goes on and your learning never stops...

    When my brain understood this, life no longer appeared obligue...

    My life stream's a question mark...

    My sentence is complete...

    LET IT GO!!

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    DeepEclipse commented on LET IT GO!!

    03-01-2010

    Ah poetic beauty. So rich in meaning and poetic delivery. The repetitive lines were like subliminal landmarks, keeping the mind anchored as it journeyed through to the pieces conclusion. In a consumer society that is highly measured in -gains- this piece speaks bane to the standard. Contentment. It reminds me of the movie -Hero-, in which the highest technique a swordsman could master...........was to sheathe his blade. So well written. You are a gifted poet.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    Ecdysis’s Poems (19)

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    Remember my name... 1 03/20/2010
    Way too soon... 1 03/12/2010
    Eye for an Eye 3 03/04/2010
    Beware of Cupid... 1 02/27/2010
    Getting Maried 0 02/23/2010
    Guess who... 3 02/07/2010
    Guardians 1 02/04/2010
    Status Quo 2 02/03/2010
    Calibration 2 02/02/2010
    Tru Luv... 1 02/01/2010
    In loves defense 1 01/31/2010
    Society 3 01/30/2010
    The L Word... 2 01/30/2010
    LET IT GO!! 1 01/28/2010
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