Letting you in ©

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    Letting you in ©

    Finally for the first time in my life,
    Im ready, ready to give
    Ready to feel, ready to be real.

    I may be new to this game but
    Im shedding my mask
    My tears, my fears
    And Im letting you in

    For all you've done, for all you've givin me
    Im ready to let you really see me
    Theres no more need for you to search or find
    The lost little girl who was inside

    She is gone and I am here
    With nothing else left to fear
    You took my insecurities and my pain
    And you cast them all away

    Now there is no hesitation when I say
    That Im letting you in, and I want you to stay
    And know it can always remain this way

    Take in what is me
    What I feel, what I see
    Know my emotions all my thoughts
    Learn of every battle that I won or I have faught

    Im letting you in, Im not going to hide
    I want you here, right here by my side
    So please come in and say,...
    Please say that you will stay.


    By Nacolle M. Brown






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    Nadia1986 commented on Letting you in ©

    05-22-2010

    Nice work it's about being raw and real and ready for life and love well put nice write.

    zakito commented on Letting you in ©

    02-17-2009

    not bad :) did he stay :) will he ? z :)

    Katamariarcher commented on Letting you in ©

    02-16-2009

    I really like it. Keep writing! :D

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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