Liar!!!

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    Liar!!!

    why do you tell me lie's?
    do you think you will get bye?
    dont you know you make me die a little inside when you do?
    what if you were in my shoes?
    having a trusting heart, a loving soul, a caring way
    to only make you look a fool as you say the lies as you do
    and to hurt someone as you do with the lies you are speading all day threw
    there is an old saying i have heard before..the truth shall set you free forever more.
    so when you stand up on your judgement day will you take the cowards way?
    or will your true self come shining threw,
    i will leave that up to you.
    but until that day arrives , just sit back and think it threw ,
    should i say a lie or be true to you??
    i will leave that entirely up to you!

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    cmlestrade commented on Liar!!!

    02-17-2010

    I have read three of your poems and they all indicate a nice person who is lied to and definitely not appreciated. It is said one never misses the water until the well runs dry. On a different note, do we lie to ourselves thinking a change will come if we just continue to act kind and loving with the undeserving?

    daniela93sweet commented on Liar!!!

    05-27-2009

    It was so passionate and the feelings in the words are so powerful! You are so amazing! The true story and judgment is very real and i can sense your emotion while i was reading it. Great Job!

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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