Life Transformation

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    There are times in life when things go in the wrong direction and we wonder why? I think is necessary to be always possitive and work hard to get our goals. Determinations is a must in whatever we want to achive. Thanks for reading Love Gloria

    Life Transformation

    Some time ago …

    My soul was lonely

    Feeling the cold side of humanity

    Some time ago …

    My heart was empty

    Tired of so much insanity

    Some time ago…

    My life was difficult

    With no pride or airs of vanity

    Some time ago… some time ago…

    I just existed as a form

    And then …. My life was transformed

    How? I will let you know

    If you go ahead and read more….

    But read the prose while alone

    ~~~

     

    As time goes

    I learned … My  soul

    Was loaded of pure crystal energy

    And I can transfer warm feelings

    Through microwaves in the air

     

    ~~~

    As times goes

    I learned… My heart

    Accepted as truth,  life-principle

    The need of love is essential

    For humankind to survive

    I evolved from  unawareness

    Turned my eyes toward the sun

    Growing through its light  up slowly

    Till love filled   again   my heart

    And the darkness and insanity

    I sometimes saw all around

    Turned to be only miseries

    And were buried under ground

    ~~~

    As times goes

    I learned…My life

    Has its  needs and demands

    That  I might not reach them all

    But at least I should try

    ~~~

    So I found  within myself

    The One Truth of Creation

    Happiness will not be encountered

    Without  determination

    As we have the power to change

    Beyond our imagination

    As we deserve what we wish

    And that’s the Truth… the Foundation

    Of past, present and future

    Of our own transformation

     

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Life Transformation

    02-12-2011

    This is a fabulous write, inspiring and creative in so many ways. I enjoyed reading it. Refreshing and invigorating to the spirit. Thanks for sharing. It looks like many poets felt this way, lots of good responses!

    Rafiqam commented on Life Transformation

    12-21-2010

    After a long pause I revisited your profile from a different angle. That was in search of a capable distinguished poet to read and rate my poem "Ghazal' recently posted on OP Website. There I saw the reading and rating of 'Life Transformation' which seemed the highest among those I came across. I read it in greater depth again today and arrived at the conclusion that you are really a great and distinguihed poet on the basis of a romantic, realistic and practical approach toward life. It will be a real honor for me if you kingly spare a few minutes to read and rate my poem 'Ghazal"- Rafiqam

    blackfootlady commented on Life Transformation

    11-27-2010

    Very Beautiful! TY for sharing this with Me.Inner Peace of Mind is Definately work for those that wonder from the reflections of truths.The Poetry did not say that I did.God Bless-Black

    optimistic commented on Life Transformation

    09-21-2010

    I Really enjoyed this reading. Granted it took me long to read this poem it could not have come at a more perfect time. Thanks for you powerful style of writing.

    carynontherhine commented on Life Transformation

    08-27-2010

    This is truly a beautiful write that I could just read over and over. Wonderful, inspiring and touching all at the same time. Hits so close to home. A great piece. Loved it!

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